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重点预习范围：

1 With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

3 Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4 Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

5 It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

6 Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7 Some groups of people have benefited from modern communication technology but some people have not benefited at all. Do you agree or disagree?

8 Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than a wider range of different subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9 In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

10 Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

11 Theoretical subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are taught in universities but students prefer more practical subjects such as accounting and computer programming. Some people believe theoretical subjects should be abandoned in universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

12 Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

13 The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. Do you agree or disagree?

14 In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

15 Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

16 Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

17 In the past, people lived in one place for a long time, but now they can live in many different places, what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

18 In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

19 In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

20 Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

21 Some people think governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

22 Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

23 The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

24 Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

25 Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

次重点预习范围：

1 Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the environment, others maintain that the major profit is the development of world business. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

2 Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

3 As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society？

4 Some people think that the library is a waste of money because computer technology is replacing its functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

5 In many cities, people these days know little about their neighbors and lack a sense of community. What are the reasons? What solutions can you suggest?

6 Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

7 Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?

8 There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys, and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

9 Some people think schools should teach students to form good behavior in addition to providing normal education. Do you agree or disagree?

10 New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

11 People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

12 In some cities, governments have tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

13 With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

14 Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

15 Today, advanced science and technology have made great changes to people’s lives, but artists such as musicians, painters, and writers are still highly valued. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

16 Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

17 Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.　

18 Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

19 The government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is an individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

20 The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

21 In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

22 In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and the family?

23 Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think the modern world makes people more independent on each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

24 The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

25 Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?

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题目：Some people say that drug companies have the responsibility to spend money on researching medicine to help the poorer countries, while others think the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For the supporters of the first opinion, the drug companies are enterprises that produce drugs（重复，改为remedies), which could save billions of lives. (可增加衔接，This means that) They can ~~also~~ light up the hope of the poor or unhealthy people (补充if they can kindly give some support to the latter for free).(对于poor这个点需要进行一些拓展，为什么贫困地区会需要药物。例如--贫困地区由于缺乏卫生设施而常有传染病--since（由于） underdeveloped places such as the rural often suffer from infectious diseases due to poor sanitation and the lack of medical equipment.) It seems that those drug companies must do something charitable and every entrepreneur of them aims at contributing（表达不恰当，改为every entrepreneur of them should aim at making contribution).（此处可分段） Clearly, however, it is not reasonable or even possible. （描述性语言，未得到论证。拓展论证可参考：Given the potential exorbitant cost of financing the disadvantaged as well as achieving any breakthrough in scientific research, it is not practical for every drug company to sacrifice their profit since they still have their own employees and other spending to look after. Another problem arising is that it would be difficult to judge how much a corporation should devote to the charity and this would cause a waste of resource and effort in supervising the proper distribution and avoiding corruption.）

题目：Lectures were used to be a way to teach large number of students, but with the technology available for education, there is no longer justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

People’s opinions differ (over) whether lectures are good way(s)(或改为still necessary) to give(可升级为deliver) education（或把give education改为impart knowledge) due to(改为considering更恰当） the popularity of modern technology, like internet and computers. While there are some benefits of using online learning.(不需要断句，while是连词,但前后的转折关系不强，可以考虑使用因果连词） I still believe that we should combine classroom-based learning and remote learning.

（开头段修改后：Opinions differ over whether lectures are still necessary to impart knowledge considering the popularity of online learning. Since the benefits of technology do exist, I advocate that education institutes should incorporate distance learning into classroom-based one so that the effects of the two can be optimized. ）

On the one hand, there are some reasons why online(可替换为computer-assisted) learning plays a very important role in education（可以具体化为can better facilitate students’ understanding). It is obvious that this learning mode bring(s)（更常使用offers/allows) great flexibility. Through this way,(可改为in that,合并两句话，减少简单句的比例） students can adjust their learning concepts and pace according to their abilities rather than struggle to keep pace with teachers in physical classes(有歧义，一般意为体育课，改为traditional classrooms). Furthermore, （补充the) internet is able to provide students with a large amount of videos, figures and musics（music不可数）, which is far more interesting and attractive(缺乏比较对象，需补充than lectures). It make(s) the process of learning easier, and students tend to(可改为might) spend more time on study (of their own accord--自愿地).

（主体段修改后：On the one hand, computer assisted learning can better facilitate students’ understanding than traditional lectures. This technological mode allows great flexibility(也可使用provides individualized experience) in that users can adjust their pace according to their abilities rather than struggle to catch up with others or feel bored with the slow progress in the class. Furthermore, the internet can offer access to numerous videos, pictures and music, thereby diversifying learning process to best motivate student’s curiosity. As a result, learners might spend more time on study of their own accord. ）

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